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it’s a cold water kind of day,
a day for finding out why i really don’t want to
get a job.
i’m thinking i just don’t want to have to talk to people who aren’t you
it’s selfish, i know.
but i’m seventeen and penniless,
and the winter’s making me feel like this is
not. what. matters.
i don’t think that anything can come close to falling asleep
at your window
waiting for you to come back and become
my ghost.
a day for finding out why i really don’t want to
get a job.
i’m thinking i just don’t want to have to talk to people who aren’t you
it’s selfish, i know.
but i’m seventeen and penniless,
and the winter’s making me feel like this is
not. what. matters.
i don’t think that anything can come close to falling asleep
at your window
waiting for you to come back and become
my ghost.
I've had this in my sta.sh for a while now, and I was debating whether or not it felt too casual and unfinished to post. However after thinking about it I have nothing more to add to this, it feels finished to me even though it's not that thought-out. I would like to start posting more of my not smaller, less technical poems. There's something just so freeing about letting everyone see your spur-of-the-moment little thoughts...I think I'm going to try it.
Sorry for the rambles
Sorry for the rambles
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There is as much, or as little, to this as most writings. I love to read spur of the moment.
It's more a true part of a person, shows more of their random thoughts.
It's more a true part of a person, shows more of their random thoughts.